A few small suggestions, Donna

Your writing is doing the heavy lifting on this site. These are only trims and one or two questions, and every suggestion below uses your own words, just moved or shortened. Nothing here changes your meaning.

Say yes or no to each one. If you would rather write it a third way, type it in the box and that is what goes on the site. When you reach the end, press the button and send Michael what it gives you.
01

Lost Animal Services says one thing twice

a trim

Two sentences, eleven words apart, make the same point. Removing the second loses nothing.

Nowmissing animals have the potential to be located and rescued. On some occasions, animals are located and recovered. And on many occasions, lost animals can make their way back home...
Suggestedmissing animals have the potential to be located and rescued. And on many occasions, lost animals can make their way back home...
02

Your strongest sentence is buried at the very end

a move

This is the most trust-building line on the whole site. A person who turns work away to protect her quality is rare, and most readers never get to the 162nd word to find it. Nothing is cut, it just moves up.

Where it sits nowLast sentence of the longest paragraph on the site.
SuggestedOpen with it: "There is a limit to how many cases can be accepted at one time in order to maintain a high level of concentration, immediate action, and professional and ethical integrity."
03

Peaceful Transitions ends by repeating itself

a trim

The final sentence says again what the paragraph already said beautifully. Ending on "as they experience their own power once more" is stronger.

The closing line now"Gaining one more layer of insight during these sessions brings you closer to those you love."
SuggestedCut that line, and end on your own: "...to help ease the pain that often intrudes into our lives following the loss of a loved one."
04

Two sessions begin with the same five words

a small change

Connection through Conversation and The Family Session both open "This consultation is dedicated to..." Changing one would help them feel like two different things.

Which would you rather changeOnly you should decide the new opening. Would you like to reword one, and which?
05

Check-In and The Single Question look like the same session

a question

Both are fifteen minutes and both are quick. Someone choosing between them will not know which one they want. One sentence from you would fix it.

What I think the difference isThe Single Question Consult is for when you have a question. Check-In is for when you simply want to know they are alright. Is that right?
06

Check-In has no fee yet

a decision

It is the only session a visitor cannot price. Until it has a fee I would keep it off the site rather than show it as undecided.

07

Gifts of Gratitude needs one rule

a decision

You offer "the gift of a session to reserve whenever you please". It is a lovely thing to offer. Every client who books will ask how and when, so it needs one plain rule before it goes live.

What I need to knowWho receives it, after how many sessions, and how do they claim it?

That is everything

Seven small things, and your writing carries the rest of the site. Press the button and send Michael whatever appears.